Strange...
Please include some actual voices in the next "episode" of this thing. Consider Making subtitles rather than weird boxes with little twists and curves around them. Also the drawings were a bit crude and I don't get what the hell this movie is about. It's extremelly random and makes no sense. The few jokes that were there were not ver funny. Most if not all the music has been remixes of super mario RPG or other such games which is not very original - you should consider using some sort of sound loops instead or better yet compose your own music. So work a bit on your graphics, add some speech and include some better jokes next time and i'm sure you'll do alright.